ext_97510 ([identity profile] kiyakotari.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kiyakotari 2008-07-09 04:15 am (UTC)

I've noticed some things I'll need to pay more attention to in future animations, of course. For example, Wren's movement toward the camera is too smooth - there's no hint of a gait in the shoulders and hips, no head-bob at all. I'll need to make sure I include that next time. The lighting isn't as consistent as I'd like, but it's not terrible, either.

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